I still want to submit for the New Blood Awards I would want to change my project. The two major ways I would address the designing the slides would be going with my original vision; incorporating cartoons and illustrations. Or I would keep my same design by not use mockups and stock images and have photoshoots tailored to each slide.
I could also possibly tweak me idea as well or at least go into more detail. Because in an effort ot not clutter each slide, I may have inadvertently made my descriptions vague. I would also revise my colour scheme a little bit and monitor how I implement it into my project.
I initial try to make a full site just to make convincing visualisation from them but it would of took to much time for this project, but now thats a not a problem when sumbiting for the upcoming awarads in March 2018.